Writing Ideas – Vampire Novel, part 57, yet more Redemptive Theme, Developing Characters Rising Action

30 August 2014, Writing Ideas – Vampire Novel, part 57, yet more Redemptive Theme, Developing Characters Rising Action

Announcement: My new novels are supposed to be released 1 September, so we are heading toward home plate.  The title of the series is Ancient Light and is based on my novel Aegypt.  The next two novels will be Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness.  They will be published individually and as a 3 in 1 book.  The initial cover is already developed, and you can see it at http://www.ancientlight.com.  I’ll keep you updated.

Introduction:  I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon.  This was my 21st novel, and on this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing.  In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes.  You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel–start with http://ldalford.wordpress.com/2010/12/12/daemon-installment-1-the-incantation/.

I’m using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published.  I’ll keep you informed along the way.  At this moment, I’m showing you the creative process I used to put together the novel.

Today’s Blog:  To see the steps in the publication process, go to my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select “production schedule,” you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.

Here are my four rules (plus one) of writing:

1. Don’t confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don’t show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your  writing.

All novels have five discrete parts:
1.  The initial scene (the beginning)
2.  The rising action
3.  The climax
4.  The falling action
5.  The dénouement

The theme statement of my new novel, Valeska, is: An agent of the organization becomes involved with a vampire girl during a mission, she becomes dependent on the agent, and she is redeemed.

There is a third type of classical redemptive theme.  This is when a person or a being is redeemed in a religious or Christian sense.  The reason this is a classical theme is that in all Western literature, even if the theme is from evil to good, there is an assumption of Christian redemption.  I point this out for historical accuracy and to make a very important point.  In any classical redemptive theme, there must be some spiritual element.  The spiritual element from the classics is one of Christian redemption, and there is no reason why this theme should be simply relegated to inspirational or Christian literature today.  The big point is, as anyone should note (C.S. Lewis’ argument), the incorporation of a spiritual creature (like a vampire, zombie, or any other undead) presumes God.  You can’t enter the spiritual regime without addressing God in some way.  The expression doesn’t need to be a stereotypical conversion or a presumptive theological construct, but without God, there is no spiritual.

Therefore, by bringing a vampire into a novel, the author is making a presumption of some type of Christian or at least a spiritual worldview.  It is possible to have other gods or other worldviews (Asian, Eastern, Western, African, etc.), but they must include some spiritual god element or they become quickly illogical.  If you are not convinced, read an unexpurgated (unabridged) copy of Dracula.  Bram Stoker was a strong Catholic and presented a powerful Christian and redemptive worldview in a novel that has been more and more secularized.  I prefer the original.  The message of Bram Stoker was one of hope and redemption.  The message of a secular Dracula is powerful, but not hopeful or pleasant in the least.  Although we have lost Aristotle’s treatise on comedy, we know the message of good comedy is that of a human overcoming a telic flaw.  In a classical redemptive theme, the telic flaw can only be overcome through spiritual means.

More tomorrow.

I’ll repeat my published novel websites so you can see more examples: http://www.ldalford.com/, and the individual novel websites: http://www.aegyptnovel.com/, http://www.centurionnovel.com/, http://www.thesecondmission.com/, http://www.theendofhonor.com/, http://www.thefoxshonor.com/, and http://www.aseasonofhonor.com/.

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Writing Ideas – Vampire Novel, part 56, more Redemptive Theme, Developing Characters Rising Action

29 August 2014, Writing Ideas – Vampire Novel, part 56, more Redemptive Theme, Developing Characters Rising Action

Announcement: My new novels are supposed to be released 1 September, so we are heading toward home plate.  The title of the series is Ancient Light and is based on my novel Aegypt.  The next two novels will be Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness.  They will be published individually and as a 3 in 1 book.  The initial cover is already developed, and you can see it at http://www.ancientlight.com.  I’ll keep you updated.

Introduction:  I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon.  This was my 21st novel, and on this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing.  In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes.  You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel–start with http://ldalford.wordpress.com/2010/12/12/daemon-installment-1-the-incantation/.

I’m using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published.  I’ll keep you informed along the way.  At this moment, I’m showing you the creative process I used to put together the novel.

Today’s Blog:  To see the steps in the publication process, go to my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select “production schedule,” you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.

Here are my four rules (plus one) of writing:

1. Don’t confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don’t show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your  writing.

All novels have five discrete parts:
1.  The initial scene (the beginning)
2.  The rising action
3.  The climax
4.  The falling action
5.  The dénouement

The theme statement of my new novel, Valeska, is: An agent of the organization becomes involved with a vampire girl during a mission, she becomes dependent on the agent, and she is redeemed.

A more unique type of redemptive theme is that a being who is generally thought to be evil could either be found to be good or could change from evil to good.  These are the types of unique themes I like to develop in my novels.  For example, the vampire novel I am writing has a theme of a redeemed vampire.  The obvious assumption is that the vampire becomes changed from a creature of evil to a creature of good.  A secondary assumption could be that the vampire changes from being a vampire back to a human.  I did not address this secondary assumption–there are reasons why this could be a good theme, but not necessarily in the universe of the novel I created.  I do like to look at “impossible” themes and have used them in the past.  That is, themes where some event is classically thought to be impossible.  For example, Aksinya.  I don’t believe any other author has written a novel where a person who calls a demon is redeemed both body and soul.  Such a redemption is generally considered “impossible.”  I would like to pursue the “impossible” theme of a vampire turned back into a human, but I think this would be extremely difficult because of what a vampire classically is.

A vampire is, by definition, a human that is dead and reanimated through some means.  The classical means is that the vampireness is conveyed by another vampire drinking the victim’s blood.  In my novel universe, the victim could only become a vampire if they were killed by the vampire and some essence of the vampire was then placed in the victim by the vampire.  This is logical and doesn’t reduce the strength of the idea of a “vampire.”  Since a vampire is already a dead human, unless you can propose the reanimation of a normal person, you can’t change a vampire.  This is one of the reasons a vampire is such a great pathetic character–they can’t change from being a vampire, but perhaps they can be redeemed in their soul.

More tomorrow.

I’ll repeat my published novel websites so you can see more examples: http://www.ldalford.com/, and the individual novel websites: http://www.aegyptnovel.com/, http://www.centurionnovel.com/, http://www.thesecondmission.com/, http://www.theendofhonor.com/, http://www.thefoxshonor.com/, and http://www.aseasonofhonor.com/.

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Writing Ideas – Vampire Novel, part 55, Redemptive Theme, Developing Characters Rising Action

28 August 2014, Writing Ideas – Vampire Novel, part 55, Redemptive Theme, Developing Characters Rising Action

Announcement: My new novels are supposed to be released 1 September, so we are heading toward home plate.  The title of the series is Ancient Light and is based on my novel Aegypt.  The next two novels will be Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness.  They will be published individually and as a 3 in 1 book.  The initial cover is already developed, and you can see it at http://www.ancientlight.com.  I’ll keep you updated.

Introduction:  I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon.  This was my 21st novel, and on this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing.  In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes.  You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel–start with http://ldalford.wordpress.com/2010/12/12/daemon-installment-1-the-incantation/.

I’m using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published.  I’ll keep you informed along the way.  At this moment, I’m showing you the creative process I used to put together the novel.

Today’s Blog:  To see the steps in the publication process, go to my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select “production schedule,” you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.

Here are my four rules (plus one) of writing:

1. Don’t confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don’t show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your  writing.

All novels have five discrete parts:
1.  The initial scene (the beginning)
2.  The rising action
3.  The climax
4.  The falling action
5.  The dénouement

The theme statement of my new novel, Valeska, is: An agent of the organization becomes involved with a vampire girl during a mission, she becomes dependent on the agent, and she is redeemed.

This is another reason I don’t like single word themes.  For example, if you say, your novel has a “love” theme, what exactly does that mean?  If you say it has a “true love” or “first love” theme, you are getting closer to some meaning–still obscure.  When I write that my novel has a redemptive theme, that can mean too many different things.

Classically, a redemptive theme means the protagonist is redeemed from some great evil in their life.  For example, the evil businessman who cheats his clients comes clean and repays what he stole, or the woman who prostitutes herself realizes her actions are wrong and becomes an upstanding member of society.

In my novel, Aksinya, the protagonist, Aksinya, called a demon from hell to help her save her family.  Her family was killed anyway.  Aksinya’s redemption is from the demon and her own demons.  These are classical redemptive themes.  Less classical, but just as important, in my mind, are redemptive themes where people are saved emotionally and mentally.  I have used these types of redemptive themes before–they can be much more powerful than a classic redemptive theme.  For example, the man who has turmoil over some terrible event in his life and overcomes the turmoil and the event, or the woman who is traumatized by abuse and overcomes that to help others.  I have used this as a theme in my novels as well.  Many times this is a good subtheme.  For example, in my novels Shadow of Light and Shadow of Darkness, the protagonist has to overcome (be redeemed) from her fear that her parents hate her and believe she is evil.  The novel is very complex in this regard, and the desire for people to make their parents happy is a very strong redemption theme.

You can see, a redemptive theme is a classic theme and one that has great potential to many audiences.

More tomorrow.

I’ll repeat my published novel websites so you can see more examples: http://www.ldalford.com/, and the individual novel websites: http://www.aegyptnovel.com/, http://www.centurionnovel.com/, http://www.thesecondmission.com/, http://www.theendofhonor.com/, http://www.thefoxshonor.com/, and http://www.aseasonofhonor.com/.

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Writing Ideas – Vampire Novel, part 54, more the Theme, Developing Characters Rising Action

27 August 2014, Writing Ideas – Vampire Novel, part 54, more the Theme, Developing Characters Rising Action

Announcement: My new novels are supposed to be released 1 September, so we are heading toward home plate.  The title of the series is Ancient Light and is based on my novel Aegypt.  The next two novels will be Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness.  They will be published individually and as a 3 in 1 book.  The initial cover is already developed, and you can see it at http://www.ancientlight.com.  I’ll keep you updated.

Introduction:  I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon.  This was my 21st novel, and on this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing.  In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes.  You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel–start with http://ldalford.wordpress.com/2010/12/12/daemon-installment-1-the-incantation/.

I’m using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published.  I’ll keep you informed along the way.  At this moment, I’m showing you the creative process I used to put together the novel.

Today’s Blog:  To see the steps in the publication process, go to my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select “production schedule,” you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.

Here are my four rules (plus one) of writing:

1. Don’t confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don’t show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your  writing.

All novels have five discrete parts:
1.  The initial scene (the beginning)
2.  The rising action
3.  The climax
4.  The falling action
5.  The dénouement

The theme statement of my new novel, Valeska, is: An agent of the organization becomes involved with a vampire girl during a mission, she becomes dependent on the agent, and she is redeemed.

I’ve mentioned this before–when you develop a theme for a novel, you should develop a unique theme.  Themes that are not very unique will not go anywhere with today’s readers or today’s publishers.  If your theme isn’t unique, you will not be able to compete in the novel marketplace.

I know already what you will say–you’ve been told that every theme has been used before and none are unique.  I used to believe this too–I think it is completely untrue.  Look at the theme statement above–that’s a pretty unique theme statement.  I’m not sure anyone has written a novel like that before.  I’m not sure anyone has written using the themes I did for many of my novels.  I will not go into the detail I did before about writing theme statements, but I will note for you that a single word theme such as redemption, has been used over and over again.  This is why I think single word themes are not very useful.  Although redemption is the theme of many of my novels, the single word “redemption” is not enough to describe their themes.

In trying to define redemption, I have written about gods and goddesses.  I’ve written about demi-gods and demi-goddesses.  I’ve written about dragons and a phoenix.  I’ve written about undead and demons. I’ve written about sorcery and magic.  In most classic themes about redemption, all the beings and ideas I listed would be on the evil and unredeemable list.  In my novels, I explore the possibility of the redemption of these creatures and of regular people as well.  Perhaps it would help to define a redemption theme.

More tomorrow.

I’ll repeat my published novel websites so you can see more examples: http://www.ldalford.com/, and the individual novel websites: http://www.aegyptnovel.com/, http://www.centurionnovel.com/, http://www.thesecondmission.com/, http://www.theendofhonor.com/, http://www.thefoxshonor.com/, and http://www.aseasonofhonor.com/.

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Writing Ideas – Vampire Novel, part 53, the Theme, Developing Characters Rising Action

26 August 2014, Writing Ideas – Vampire Novel, part 53, the Theme, Developing Characters Rising Action

Announcement: My new novels are supposed to be released 1 September, so we are heading toward home plate.  The title of the series is Ancient Light and is based on my novel Aegypt.  The next two novels will be Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness.  They will be published individually and as a 3 in 1 book.  The initial cover is already developed, and you can see it at http://www.ancientlight.com.  I’ll keep you updated.

Introduction:  I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon.  This was my 21st novel, and on this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing.  In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes.  You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel–start with http://ldalford.wordpress.com/2010/12/12/daemon-installment-1-the-incantation/.

I’m using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published.  I’ll keep you informed along the way.  At this moment, I’m showing you the creative process I used to put together the novel.

Today’s Blog:  To see the steps in the publication process, go to my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select “production schedule,” you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.

Here are my four rules (plus one) of writing:

1. Don’t confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don’t show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your  writing.

All novels have five discrete parts:
1.  The initial scene (the beginning)
2.  The rising action
3.  The climax
4.  The falling action
5.  The dénouement

The theme statement of my new novel, Valeska, is: An agent of the organization becomes involved with a vampire girl during a mission, she becomes dependent on the agent, and she is redeemed.

The theme of Valeska is the redemption (or the ability to be redeemed) of a Vampire.  This is one of the points I made before about themes.  This idea is a unique theme.  I don’t know if anyone ever thought to write using this theme, I know I haven’t read it or heard about it.  That doesn’t mean someone else hasn’t used it before, but I rather doubt it.  The assumption about vampires as spiritual creatures (and all classical vampires must be spiritual creatures) is that there is no way they can be redeemed.  They are, literally, the living unredeemable.  In fact, all the undead are supposedly unredeemable.  I already touched on this as a subtheme in a couple of my novels.

I have two characters, Scaith and Oba, who are humans held from death.  They are literally undead beings.  Scaith and Oba were made by the beings I write about in my Ancient Light novels.  In these novels, I address the character of these beings and their “redemption.”  Oba was redeemed from the evil he was made for by his experiences and his protection of Lumiere’ Bolang.  His journey of redemption took more than one novel in the series and eventually led to his destruction.  He is a very engaging character.  Scaith, on the other hand, was a creature made in a fit of despair.  Her death was an accident, and she gained many of the memories of Oba.  Scaith was a person who was already moving away from evil before she died.  As a human held back from death, she had an opportunity to gain the power she needed and desired to act within the world.  I should mention, that each of my novels addresses a person or being whom the world might imagine can’t be redeemed or who would be normally regarded as evil.  In each novel, I address their goodness and potential redemption.

More tomorrow.

I’ll repeat my published novel websites so you can see more examples: http://www.ldalford.com/, and the individual novel websites: http://www.aegyptnovel.com/, http://www.centurionnovel.com/, http://www.thesecondmission.com/, http://www.theendofhonor.com/, http://www.thefoxshonor.com/, and http://www.aseasonofhonor.com/.

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Writing Ideas – Vampire Novel, part 52, more Themes, Developing Characters Rising Action

25 August 2014, Writing Ideas – Vampire Novel, part 52, more Themes, Developing Characters Rising Action

Announcement: My new novels are supposed to be released 1 September, so we are heading toward home plate.  The title of the series is Ancient Light and is based on my novel Aegypt.  The next two novels will be Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness.  They will be published individually and as a 3 in 1 book.  The initial cover is already developed, and you can see it at http://www.ancientlight.com.  I’ll keep you updated.

Introduction:  I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon.  This was my 21st novel, and on this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing.  In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes.  You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel–start with http://ldalford.wordpress.com/2010/12/12/daemon-installment-1-the-incantation/.

I’m using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published.  I’ll keep you informed along the way.  At this moment, I’m showing you the creative process I used to put together the novel.

Today’s Blog:  To see the steps in the publication process, go to my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select “production schedule,” you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.

Here are my four rules (plus one) of writing:

1. Don’t confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don’t show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your  writing.

All novels have five discrete parts:
1.  The initial scene (the beginning)
2.  The rising action
3.  The climax
4.  The falling action
5.  The dénouement

The theme statement of my new novel, Valeska, is: An agent of the organization becomes involved with a vampire girl during a mission, she becomes dependent on the agent, and she is redeemed.

If you haven’t noticed, I’m tying the character development back into the theme of the novel.  As I mentioned and you know, vampires supposedly have no hope of redemption.  One of the general themes I’ve been investigating in my writing is redemption for creatures or beings for whom we might imagine there never could be any redemption.  My overall Ancient Light novels started this idea about ancient gods and goddesses.  I really began to explore the concept with Aksinya.  A person who calls a demon can’t possibly be redeemed–can she?  I went further on this theme with Khione.  How can an abused, sex-slave, demi-goddess ever find redemption?  Valeska is just another step in this direction.  When I started writing, I couldn’t imagine how a vampire could be redeemed.  I’m not sure I answered the question as succinctly as many would like, but I like the answer.

By the way, I finished the novel yesterday 30 March 2014.  I write these blogs ahead for may reasons–that’s why the time delay.  The next step is editing.  I already know where there are some issues.  I don’t have an inspiration for another novel at the moment, but I’m sure one will come to me in a month or two–or less.  The last one came to me even before I finished Khione.  The trick is then in the publication.  That is a long process that requires much patience.  Glad I have a day job.

More tomorrow.

I’ll repeat my published novel websites so you can see more examples: http://www.ldalford.com/, and the individual novel websites: http://www.aegyptnovel.com/, http://www.centurionnovel.com/, http://www.thesecondmission.com/, http://www.theendofhonor.com/, http://www.thefoxshonor.com/, and http://www.aseasonofhonor.com/.

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Writing Ideas – Vampire Novel, part 51, Themes, Developing Characters Rising Action

24 August 2014, Writing Ideas – Vampire Novel, part 51, Themes, Developing Characters Rising Action

Announcement: My new novels are supposed to be released 1 September, so we are heading toward home plate.  The title of the series is Ancient Light and is based on my novel Aegypt.  The next two novels will be Sister of Light and Sister of Darkness.  They will be published individually and as a 3 in 1 book.  The initial cover is already developed, and you can see it at http://www.ancientlight.com.  I’ll keep you updated.

Introduction:  I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon.  This was my 21st novel, and on this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing.  In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes.  You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel–start with http://ldalford.wordpress.com/2010/12/12/daemon-installment-1-the-incantation/.

I’m using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published.  I’ll keep you informed along the way.  At this moment, I’m showing you the creative process I used to put together the novel.

Today’s Blog:  To see the steps in the publication process, go to my writing website http://www.ldalford.com/ and select “production schedule,” you will be sent to http://www.sisteroflight.com/.

Here are my four rules (plus one) of writing:

1. Don’t confuse your readers.
2. Entertain your readers.
3. Ground your readers in the writing.
4. Don’t show (or tell) everything.
5. Immerse yourself in the world of your  writing.

All novels have five discrete parts:
1.  The initial scene (the beginning)
2.  The rising action
3.  The climax
4.  The falling action
5.  The dénouement

The theme statement of my new novel, Valeska, is: An agent of the organization becomes involved with a vampire girl during a mission, she becomes dependent on the agent, and she is redeemed.

The main point about the character Heidi/Valeska, who I developed for my vampire novel is not who she was, but rather who she is now.  The who she is now was created by her past as a vampire.  Her past made her a vampire, but her life (uh death) as a vampire made her into the character she is during the time of the novel.  Further, the time of the novel shows some change in her place and being.  These changes during the time of the novel bear on the theme of the novel itself.  The question on the table is what during Heidi’s time as a vampire changed her from an evil and self absorbed person to one who is gentle and properly perceptive?

If we note that the Heidi before she became a vampire was completely in control of everything.  She controlled those around her and herself.  She made the world change for her.  When she was tired of her lover, she murdered him.  When she was a student, she controlled others through fear and abuse.  We get the feeling that she began to abuse and control her first abusive nanny while she was yet a child.  Heidi controlled her world and the people around her–but as a vampire, she was kept as a pet.  She was under the control of her master.  She was not allowed to hunt.  She was not allowed the patent pleasures of a vampire–to dine on freshly taken blood during the full moon.  She lived a life of extravagance and study under the finger of her master.  In this sphere, she learned self-control and patience.  She learned for almost two hundred years to put away her own desires and wants as the pet of her master.  She had no friends and no one to control.  She became who she is in the novel because of the time she spent as a vampire.  We see she is not seeking–she knows her end.  Vampires can’t seek for anything–they are creatures condemned and without redemption.

More tomorrow.

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