10 April 2021, Writing – part xx470 Writing a Novel, Another Protagonist and Telic Flaw
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Introduction: I wrote the novel Aksinya: Enchantment and the Daemon. This was my 21st novel and through this blog, I gave you the entire novel in installments that included commentary on the writing. In the commentary, in addition to other general information on writing, I explained, how the novel was constructed, the metaphors and symbols in it, the writing techniques and tricks I used, and the way I built the scenes. You can look back through this blog and read the entire novel beginning withhttp://www.pilotlion.blogspot.com/2010/10/new-novel-part-3-girl-and-demon.html.
I’m using this novel as an example of how I produce, market, and eventually (we hope) get a novel published. I’ll keep you informed along the way.
The four plus one basic rules I employ when writing:
- Don’t confuse your readers.
- Entertain your readers.
- Ground your readers in the writing.
- Don’t show (or tell) everything.
4a. Show what can be seen, heard, felt, smelled, and tasted on the stage of the novel.
- Immerse yourself in the world of your writing.
These are the steps I use to write a novel including the five discrete parts of a novel:
- Design the initial scene
- Develop a theme statement (initial setting, protagonist, protagonist’s helper or antagonist, action statement)
- Research as required
- Develop the initial setting
- Develop the characters
- Identify the telic flaw (internal and external)
- Write the initial scene (identify the output: implied setting, implied characters, implied action movement)
- Write the next scene(s) to the climax (rising action)
- Write the climax scene
- Write the falling action scene(s)
- Write the dénouement scene
I finished writing my 29th novel, working title, Detective, potential title Blue Rose: Enchantment and the Detective. The theme statement is: Lady Azure Rose Wishart, the Chancellor of the Fae, supernatural detective, and all around dangerous girl, finds love, solves cases, breaks heads, and plays golf.
Here is the cover proposal for Blue Rose: Enchantment and the Detective.
The most important scene in any novel is the initial scene, but eventually, you have to move to the rising action. I am continuing to write on my 30th novel, working title Red Sonja. I finished my 29th novel, working title Detective. I’m planning to start on number 31, working title Shifter.
How to begin a novel. Number one thought, we need an entertaining idea. I usually encapsulate such an idea with a theme statement. Since I’m writing a new novel, we need a new theme statement. Here is an initial cut.
For novel 30: Red Sonja, a Soviet spy, infiltrates the X-plane programs at Edwards AFB as a test pilot’s administrative clerk, learns about freedom, and is redeemed.
For novel 31: Deirdre and Sorcha are redirected to French finishing school where they discover difficult mysteries, people, and events.
Here is the scene development outline:
- Scene input (comes from the previous scene output or is an initial scene)
- Write the scene setting (place, time, stuff, and characters)
- Imagine the output, creative elements, plot, telic flaw resolution (climax) and develop the tension and release.
- Write the scene using the output and creative elements to build the tension.
- Write the release
- Write the kicker
Today: Why don’t we go back to the basics and just writing a novel? I can tell you what I do, and show you how I go about putting a novel together. We can start with developing an idea then move into the details of the writing.
To start a novel, I picture an initial scene. I may start from a protagonist or just launch into mental development of an initial scene. I get the idea for an initial scene from all kinds of sources. To help get the creative juices flowing, let’s look at the initial scene.
- Meeting between the protagonist and the antagonist or the protagonist’s helper
- Action point in the plot
- Buildup to an exciting scene
- Indirect introduction of the protagonist
Ideas. We need ideas. Ideas allow us to figure out the protagonist and the telic flaw. Ideas don’t come fully armed from the mind of Zeus. We need to cultivate ideas.
- Read novels.
- Fill your mind with good stuff—basically the stuff you want to write about.
- Figure out what will build ideas in your mind and what will kill ideas in your mind.
- Make the catharsis.
The development of ideas is based on study and research, but it is also based on creativity. Creativity is the extrapolation of older ideas to form new ones or to present old ideas in a new form. It is a reflection of something new created with ties to the history, science, and logic (the intellect). Creativity requires consuming, thinking, and producing.
If we have filled our mind with all kinds of information and ideas, we are ready to become creative. Creativity means the extrapolation of older ideas to form new ones or to present old ideas in a new form. Literally, we are seeing the world in a new way, or actually, we are seeing some part of the world in a new way.
I’ve worked through creativity and the protagonist. The ultimate point is that if you properly develop your protagonist, you have created your novel. This moves us on to plots and initial scenes. As I noted, if you have a protagonist, you have a novel. The reason is that a protagonist comes with a telic flaw, and a telic flaw provides a plot and theme. If you have a protagonist, that gives you a telic flaw, a plot, and a theme. I will also argue this gives you an initial scene as well.
So, we worked extensively on the protagonist. I gave you many examples great, bad, and average. Most of these were from classics, but I also used my own novels and protagonists as examples. Here’s my plan.
- The protagonist comes with a telic flaw – the telic flaw isn’t necessarily a flaw in the protagonist, but rather a flaw in the world of the protagonist that only the Romantic protagonist can resolve.
- The telic flaw determines the plot.
- The telic flaw determines the theme.
- The telic flaw and the protagonist determines the initial scene.
- The protagonist and the telic flaw determines the initial setting.
- Plot examples from great classic plots.
- Plot examples from mediocre classic plots.
- Plot examples from my novels.
- Creativity and the telic flaw and plots.
- Writer’s block as a problem of continuing the plot.
Every great or good protagonist comes with their own telic flaw. I showed how this worked with my own writing and novels. Let’s go over it in terms of the plot.
This is all about the telic flaw. Every protagonist and every novel must come with a telic flaw. They are the same telic flaw. That telic flaw can be external, internal or both.
We found that a self-discovery telic flaw or a personal success telic flaw can potentially take a generic plot. We should be able to get an idea for the plot purely from the protagonist, telic flaw and setting. All of these are interlaced and bring us our plot.
For a great plot, the resolution of the telic flaw has to be a surprise to the protagonist and to the reader. This is both the measure and the goal. As I noted before, for a great plot, the author needs to make the telic flaw resolution appear to be impossible, but then it happens. There is much more to this.
Here is the list of classics that everyone should read. What I want to do is evaluate this list for the plots.
This is the plan. Let’s look at each novel and try to pull out the plot types, the telic flaw, and the theme of the novel. The ultimate point is we can glean plot ideas and types to add to our list. Part of this evaluation, we can try to identify the zero and the hero of the protagonist. All this might help us define plots and perhaps help us to develop plots for our own novels. This is kind of like looking at art as an artist and figuring out what makes a picture successful.
1 Pride and Prejudice – Jane Austen
2 The Lord of the Rings – JRR Tolkien
3 Jane Eyre – Charlotte Bronte
4 Dandelion Wine – Ray Bradbury – Best modern novel in English.
5 To Kill a Mockingbird – Harper Lee
6 The Bible – Most important book to understand Western culture.
7 Wuthering Heights – Emily Bronte
8 Nineteen Eighty Four – George Orwell
9 We The Living – Ayn Rand
10 Great Expectations – Charles Dickens
11 Little Women – Louisa M Alcott
12 Tess of the D’Urbervilles – Thomas Hardy
13 Dune – Frank Herbert
14 Complete Works of Shakespeare – better to see as plays
15 Rebecca – Daphne Du Maurier
16 The Hobbit – JRR Tolkien
17 The Cadwal Chronicles – Jack Vance
18 Catcher in the Rye – JD Salinger
19 The Green Pearl Novels – Jack Vance
20 Middlemarch – George Eliot
21 Gone With The Wind – Margaret Mitchel
22 The Great Gatsby – F Scott Fitzgerald
23 Bleak House – Charles Dickens
24 War and Peace – Leo Tolstoy
25 Starship Troopers – Robert Heinlein
27 Crime and Punishment – Fyodor Dostoyevsky
28 Grapes of Wrath – John Steinbeck
29 Alice in Wonderland – Lewis Carroll
30 The Wind in the Willows – Kenneth Grahame
31 Anna Karenina – Leo Tolstoy
32 David Copperfield – Charles Dickens
33 Chronicles of Narnia – CS Lewis
34 Emma -Jane Austen
35 Persuasion – Jane Austen
36 Atlas Shrugged – Ayn Rand
37 The Tale of Genji – Murasaki Shikibu
38 The House of Seven Gables – Nathaniel Hawthorne
39 The Scarlet Letter – Nathaniel Hawthorne
40 Winnie the Pooh – AA Milne
41 Animal Farm – George Orwell
42 Dracula – Bram Stoker
43 Til We All Have Faces – C.S. Lewis
44 Le Morte D’Arthur – Thomas Malory
45 The Woman in White – Wilkie Collins
46 Anne of Green Gables – LM Montgomery
47 Far From The Madding Crowd – Thomas Hardy
48 Ivanhoe – Sir Walter Scott
49 Lord of the Flies – William Golding
50 The Fountainhead – Ayn Rand
51 What Katy Did – Sarah Chauncey Woolsey under her pen name Susan Coolidge
52 A Little Princess – Frances Hodgson Burnett
53 The Secret Garden – Frances Hodgson Burnett
54 Sense and Sensibility – Jane Austen
55 The Jungle Book – Rudyard Kipling
56 Kim – Rudyard Kipling
57 A Tale Of Two Cities – Charles Dickens
58 Brave New World – Aldous Huxley
59 Beowulf – Unknown
60 The Odyssey – Homer
61 Of Mice and Men – John Steinbeck
62 Lolita – Vladimir Nabokov
63 The Moonstone – Wilkie Collins
64 The Maltese Falcon – Dashiell Hammett
65 Count of Monte Cristo – Alexandre Dumas
66 As I Lay Dying – William Faulkner
67 Jude the Obscure – Thomas Hardy
68 Robinson Caruso – Daniel Defoe
69 The Red Badge of Courage – Stephen Crane
70 Moby Dick – Herman Melville
71 Oliver Twist – Charles Dickens
72 Don Quixote – Miguel De Cervantes
73 Heidi – Johanna Spyri
74 Hans Brinker – Mary Mapes Dodge
75Ulysses – James Joyce
76 The Inferno – Dante
77 The Big Sky Country – Arlo Guthrie
78 Germinal – Emile Zola
79 Vanity Fair – William Makepeace Thackeray
80 The Black Arrow – Robert Louis Stevenson
81 A Christmas Carol – Charles Dickens
82 Treasure Island – Robert Louis Stevenson
83 The Gulag Archipelago – Aleksandr Solzhenitsyn
84 The Miser – George Elliot
85 Madame Bovary – Gustave Flaubert
86 For Whom the Bell Tolls – Ernest Hemmingway
87 Tarzan – Edger Rice Burroughs
88 The Death of Socrates – Plato
89 Adventures of Sherlock Holmes – Sir Arthur Conan Doyle
90 I, Robot – Isaac Asimov
91 Heart of Darkness – Joseph Conrad
92 The Little Prince – Antoine De Saint-Exupery
93 Huckleberry Fin – Mark Twain
94 Watership Down – Richard Adams
95 Gulliver’s Travels – Jonathan Swift
96 Matilda – Roald Dahl
97 The Three Musketeers – Alexandre Dumas
98 The Canterbury Tales – Geoffrey Chaucer
99 Charlie and the Chocolate Factory – Roald Dahl
100 Les Miserables – Victor Hugo
101 The Once and Future King – T.H. White
102 The Deerslayer – James Fenimore Cooper
103 The Black Book of Communism – Various
104 Ben Hur – Lew Wallace
105 The Robe – Lloyd C. Douglas
106 The Pilgrim’s Progress – John Bunyan
107 The Histories – Herodotus
108 Lives – Plutarch
109 The Call of the Wild – Jack London
110 Stand on Zanzibar – John Brunner
111 The Shockwave Rider – John Brunner
112 The Aeneid – Virgil
This is what I did. I looked at each novel and pulled out the plot types, the telic flaw, plotline, and the theme of the novel. I didn’t make a list of the themes, but we identified the telic flaw as internal and external and by plot type. This generally gives the plotline.
Here’s the list of plots from the 112 classics in literature.
1. Redemption – 17i, 7e, 23ei, 8 – 49%
2. Detective or mystery – 56, 1e – 51%
3. Messiah – 10 – 9%
4. End of the World – 3 – 3%
5. War – 20 – 18%
6. Anti-war –2 – 2%
7. Revenge or vengeance –3ie, 3e, 45 – 46%
8. Revelation –2e, 64, 1i – 60%
9. Zero to hero – 29 – 26%
10. Romance –1ie, 41 – 37%
11. Achievement – 16e, 19ei, 4i, 43 – 73%
12. Article – 1e, 46 – 42%
13. Travel –1e, 62 – 56%
14. Coming of age –1ei, 25 – 23%
15. Progress of technology – 6 – 5%
16. Discovery – 3ie, 57 – 54%
17. Rejected love (rejection) – 1ei, 21 – 20%
18. Miscommunication – 8 – 7%
19. Love triangle – 14 – 12%
20. Betrayal – 1i, 1ie, 46 – 43%
21. Totalitarian – 1e, 8 – 8%
22. Blood will out or fate –1i, 1e, 26 – 25%
23. Psychological –1i, 45 – 41%
24. Horror – 15 – 13%
25. Magic – 8 – 7%
26. Mistaken identity – 18 – 16%
27. Money – 2e, 26 – 25%
28. Spoiled child – 7 – 6%
29. Children – 24 – 21%
30. Historical – 19 – 17%
31. Legal – 5 – 4%
32. Adultery – 18 – 16%
33. Illness – 1e, 19 – 18%
34. School – 11 – 10%
35. Self-discovery – 3i, 12 – 13%
36. Guilt or Crime – 32 – 29%
37. Anti-hero – 6 – 5%
38. Immorality – 3i, 8 – 10%
39. Proselytizing – 4 – 4%
40. Satire – 10 – 9%
41. Reason – 10, 1ie – 10%
42. Escape – 1ie, 23 – 21%
43. Knowledge or Skill – 26 – 23%
44. Camaraderie – 19 – 17%
45. Parallel – 4 – 4%
46. Allegory – 10 – 9%
47. Curse – 4 – 4%
48. Insanity – 8 – 7%
49. Fantasy world – 5 – 4%
50. Mentor – 12 – 11%
51. Prison – 2 – 2%
52. Secrets – 21 – 19%
We have a list of all the major plots from this list of classics in literature. The question is what can we do with it? This is the first step in evaluating our results. I took a percentage of the results based on the number of classics.
Modern writing is all about the Romantic—both Romantic protagonists and Romantic plots. This is where we are going and this is the focus of modern entertaining literature.
In the end, we can see there are just a few baseline plots that are characteristics of most classics. These are the revelation, achievement, and redemption plots. When I write these are baseline, I mean that they are overall plots that might also have a different plotline or other plots directly supporting them. Here’s what I mean exactly about each of these plots:
Redemption: the protagonist must make an internal or external change to resolve the telic flaw. This is the major style of most great modern plots.
Revelation: the novel reveals portions of the life, experiences, and ideas of the protagonist in a cohesive and serial fashion from the initial scene to the climax and telic flaw resolution.
Achievement: the novel is characterized by a goal that the protagonist must achieve to resolve the telic flaw.
I evaluated the list of plots and categorized them according to the following scale:
Overall (o) – These are the three overall plots we defined above: redemption, achievement, and revelation.
Achievement (a) – There are plots that fall under the idea of the achievement plot.
Quality(q) – These are plots based on a personal or character quality.
Setting(s) – These are plots based on a setting.
Item(i) – These are plots based on an item.
All of the plots we looked at fall into one of these five. Let’s do that:
1. Redemption (o) – 17i, 7e, 23ei, 8 – 49%
2. Revelation (o) –2e, 64, 1i – 60%
3. Achievement (o) – 16e, 19ei, 4i, 43 – 73%
1. Detective or mystery (a) – 56, 1e – 51%
2. Revenge or vengeance (a) –3ie, 3e, 45 – 46%
3. Zero to hero (a) – 29 – 26%
4. Romance (a) –1ie, 41 – 37%
5. Coming of age (a) –1ei, 25 – 23%
6. Progress of technology (a) – 6 – 5%
7. Discovery (a) – 3ie, 57 – 54%
8. Money (a) – 2e, 26 – 25%
9. Spoiled child (a) – 7 – 6%
10. Legal (a) – 5 – 4%
11. Adultery (qa) – 18 – 16%
12. Self-discovery (a) – 3i, 12 – 13%
13. Guilt or Crime (a) – 32 – 29%
14. Proselytizing (a) – 4 – 4%
15. Reason (a) – 10, 1ie – 10%
16. Escape (a) – 1ie, 23 – 21%
17. Knowledge or Skill (a) – 26 – 23%
18. Secrets (a) – 21 – 19%
1. Messiah (q) – 10 – 9%
2. Adultery (qa) – 18 – 16%
3. Rejected love (rejection) (q) – 1ei, 21 – 20%
4. Miscommunication (q) – 8 – 7%
5. Love triangle (q) – 14 – 12%
6. Betrayal (q) – 1i, 1ie, 46 – 43%
7. Blood will out or fate (q) –1i, 1e, 26 – 25%
8. Psychological (q) –1i, 45 – 41%
9. Magic (q) – 8 – 7%
10. Mistaken identity (q) – 18 – 16%
11. Illness (q) – 1e, 19 – 18%
12. Anti-hero (q) – 6 – 5%
13. Immorality (q) – 3i, 8 – 10%
14. Satire (q) – 10 – 9%
15. Camaraderie (q) – 19 – 17%
16. Curse (q) – 4 – 4%
17. Insanity (q) – 8 – 7%
18. Mentor (q) – 12 – 11%
1. End of the World (s) – 3 – 3%
2. War (s) – 20 – 18%
3. Anti-war (s) –2 – 2%
4. Travel (s) –1e, 62 – 56%
5. Totalitarian (s) – 1e, 8 – 8%
6. Horror (s) – 15 – 13%
7. Children (s) – 24 – 21%
8. Historical (s) – 19 – 17%
9. School (s) – 11 – 10%
10. Parallel (s) – 4 – 4%
11. Allegory (s) – 10 – 9%
12. Fantasy world (s) – 5 – 4%
13. Prison (s) – 2 – 2%
1. Article (i) – 1e, 46 – 42%
If we start with the protagonist, I can’t guarantee you the next bestseller, but I can assure you it will solve four problems common to novelists:
1. What is the plot?
2. Why is my novel so short?
3. Why is my novel so simplistic and uncomplicated in terms of plot and theme?
4. Why do I get writer’s block when I want to write?
Let’s see where we are:
1. What can you write about? We need a protagonist from your experience. Not necessarily your past, but from what you know.
2. We can start with a real person.
That last example was a great one. I haven’t written about this protagonist and I likely won’t. The problem with this protagonist is that the subject is most likely best tackled by a woman. I could write it, but it really isn’t my tour de force.
What is important to note is that the protagonist comes with her own telic flaw. The telic flaw is a characteristic of the protagonist. You don’t need to build a storyline or a plot line because they come with the protagonist. Let’s try another example.
Let’s have a screw-up from British intelligence. Since I worked in special operations and special missions, I can write about them. Perhaps I need to explain this a little. In my time, special missions was covert and special operations was overt. Think of special missions as the sneaky secret operations you do where you don’t want anyone to guess what you are up to. Thus, you have aircraft that are unmarked or marked with civilian registries and the pilots and crewmen are dressed like civilians. In special operations, the aircraft are military aircraft and everyone can tell what they can do, but not necessarily what they are up to. One is covert and the other overt. In one case, you don’t want anyone to know you might be accomplishing a military operations. In the other case, you don’t care, but you need special people and systems to accomplish the work. Special operations and special missions both are fed by intelligence services. One can be considered agents or operatives of the intelligence business, the other are military personnel accomplishing normal military type operations.
I write about foreign intelligence operations because I can and they are similar to the operations I’m used to. Since I don’t know anything about them directly, it’s okay. So, I can write about intelligence operations. I really shouldn’t write about American intelligence operations because that would get me in trouble. The French and Brits are fair game.
Don’t worry, I’m not giving up any of their secrets. I’m just using the information I know to write entertaining stories.
Let’s start with a British screw-up from the MI (Military Intelligence) structure. The Brits aren’t keeping much of this secret. They have an MI-6 agency. There used to be MI-1 to MI-19. MI-19 is the group I use all the time as what I call The Organization. My screw-up is named Shiggaion Tash. She happens to be a genius, but a genius with a problem. She can’t take responsibility, and she continually makes mistakes that get her busted and moved from agency to agency. She really is a smart girl, but she has a problem.
This is Shiggy from my novel, Sorcha: Enchantment and the Curse. Shiggy is the protagonist. Do you see Shiggy’s problem? What a wonderful problem. I loved writing about Shiggy because she came with such a wonderful problem. I happened to mention her name because Shiggaion is a real name. How would you like to have this name and force others to use it? That is part of Shiggy’s problem.
Shiggy and the other character I made up as an example both came with their own telic flaws. These can be turned immediately into plotlines. Perhaps we should look at this next.
In the end, we can figure out what makes a work have a great plot, and apply this to our writing.
Let’s start with the idea of an internal and external telic flaw. Then let’s provide it a wrapper. The wrapper is the plot.
The beginning of creativity is study and effort. We can use this to extrapolate to creativity. In addition, we need to look at recording ideas and working with ideas.
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